the spoils of arogance "rp topic"

[dies-in-water]

this is a rp you can join just inform me first just pm a small back round of your character and come play you cant kill other players or be a god or control other characters but you can do any thing but those things oh and you cant change the story i will start but you can kill npcs and control npcs

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the argoinion die water in water heads to the roads heading for his contract he must take down the merchants heading to balmora they have artifacts of there deadra god and they must be punished he waits on top of a hill like a bird watching suddenly they come by but they must have hired a fighters guild member to protect them dies in water sighs knowing it wont be much of a fight considering that s the fighters guild member is just some dunmer in light armor with a sword he jumps down the dunmer merchants flee back the fighters guild member stays in a defensive poster using his strength he and claws he tears of the warriors  fore arm and throws it asid the warrior falls to the ground the merchants stund in fear begin to s in water did norun he respons with throwind the woriors sword in pailing on of them the other two atill struck in fear keep running dies in water did not mind the other two he had gotten what he needed he started to head back.

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thats the start lead on from there i kinda didint check my spelling but if you are cofused pm me and dont forget to send me the character summery to thats it for now i wont keep gowing intill two more peaple join.

[Young Dragon]

hmmm i got wat ya meen i gotta think of sumthing first then ill post

[metamay]

You might want to practice a bit of punctuation if you want people to read your story. Just a friendly tip.

[dies-in-water]

hmmm i got wat ya meen i gotta think of sumthing first then ill post

well you can use your tes character if you have one well if your on this sight than you proboly have one lol

You might want to practice a bit of punctuation if you want people to read your story. Just a friendly tip.

yea when i was done i realised that. its a habit i have but yea i just used it to start off ill make sure i make better use of my puncuation ijust used two.for me its hard to remember those "'.,?

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