Fan Fiction Competition!

[metamay]

I may be slow but who's Bjorni? I can't seem to connect him to the rest of the story. I'll vote when I get that cleared up.

[The Khajiits of the nine]

Bjorni is Loken. I believe HolyWalrus just got a little mixed up, for the majority of the story calling the main character Loken(first name) but at one point called the character by the last name(Bjorni).

His name is Loken Bjorni, and he has no idea what he's in store for.[/i]

[HolyWalrus]

Heh that story wuz really bad in my opinion.. I suck at making short stories, only long ones x_x.

Anyone else can post a story after 4 people have rated it.

[metamay]

Oh, thanks Khajiits! I missed that line I guess, sorry Walrus.
Well with that out of the way I'll rate it 6. It's not a bad story but it could have been told a little better. I could not have written a better one for sure, so good job.